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Submitted: May 10, 2008
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yes, I am
I hope you think you've beaten me
Hope I start talking crazy before you understand me
are we through?
you think that I'm beneath you
but you like the things that I do
wrap 'em up and take 'em with you
...
shame on me
shame on the things that I'd be
if you could complicate me
if you could get inside me

~Matchbox 20

I might change this a wee bit later, not sure I'm completely satisfied with it yet, so critiques are extra appreciated.

Poem inspired by Victor Brodeur.
Photographer & model: me.
All other work by me.
Poetry & spill photo: March 2008. Background photo & digital work: May 2008.

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it's so beautiful,,,, i cry.

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IN LIFE
crocodile tears, born of self-pity.

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