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Shot July 2007
Model is my daughter, Amaryllis

Critiques


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I think the shot is generally great, but is let down by a few technical issues. The flash in the top right leaf is quite dominating, and I think that the image could benefit from some post-processing. You could most likely tone down the highlight burnout in the leaf digitally, and I would probably also go with a mild sharpening and resize the image to maybe 2/3 of its current size to improve clarity.

I commend you on catching such a great expression and framing it so creatively, good job! I also like the use of colors and how the green complements the colour of her skin tone. You also got the spark in her eyes just right.
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Ain't she precious?

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I think, therefore I'm single. ~ Lizz Winstead

Feminism is the radical notion that women are people. ~ Cheris Kramarae and Paula Treichler

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July 4, 2009
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Camera Data

Canon
Canon PowerShot A400
1/60 second
F/5.6
6 mm
Jul 12, 2007, 1:59:19 PM

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